Saturday, 20 October 2012

CHAPTER 42 (old story)


SECOND CHAPTER \o/



Saturday 6 o'clock 

I was on my way back home with the girls, the music blasted as we were going 

I was thinking of Zaid, laish maykalmny 6ool ilweekend, actually its been 5 days, wai3 wai3 mo kafo a7ad yet3alag feh, w a9lan ana laish ga3da afaker 3ana? Mnu ohwa? kaifa bl 6agag laykalmny, khal eyro7 eysolf wya "Sara" :):):) 

My train of thoughts was cut as my phone vibrated on my lap, i checked wela it was a whatsapp from him, chena yadry iny ga3da afaker feeh!!! 3omra 6weel mashalah

Zaid: Hallah bel ga63a

i took 10 minutes to reply, ya3ny thegeela:p

Me: hallah feek:p

He replied instantly, even less than 10 seconds!

Zaid: shda3wa matsalmen walah tgolen shlonk?

Me: haha, elmafroth int tsalm:p

Zaid: w laish anaa

Me: lana inta el 9bay

Zaid: khala9 3ayal bedam elsalfa chethy, basolf wyach kelyom, w fech khair matrden wla tgoleen 9akayt rasy, bathb7ch lana ana el '9bay':p

Me: looool khalas okay:p

Zaid: haha shlonch?

Me: walah bkhair el7mdela, int shlonk?

Zaid: bkhair damch eb khair

Me: dom inshalah

Zaid: damat ayamch

I didn't know to reply with what so i sent him a ":p" face

Zaid: hmm meshtehy akel shay 7lw, shnu eqtera7atch?

Me: ana 3omry ma sheft desert 7lw akthar men Hessa Al X

Zaid: ohhh hthy ely tabeny a9ekha block men awalha

Me: LOOOL!

Zaid: loool sh'hal theqa wya wayhch:p

Me: uff uff khala9 ana mo 7lwa okay?

Zaid: la mo okay, ambala intay 7lwa w mn a7la il banat okay?

I blushed ledaraja lulu lafat 3alay

Me: haha thankyou:p

Zaid: wainch?

Me: 7adra mn ilshalaih you?

Zaid: baitkom:p

Me: la bela thalam baitna

Zaid: chubay a9lan mnawer

Me: lool akeed mnawer

Zaid sent me a picture

Me: E6LA3 BARA DARY!

Zaid: wahhahaa mara7 a6la3

Zaid sent me another picture

Me: GOOOOM 3AN FRASHYYYY

Zaid: ta7lmeen

Me: yal baykh goom

Zaid: la yalah banam gn

Me: w qasaman bela ya zaid Al X en radait baytna w sheftk eb dary by9er shay ma 9ar

Zaid: shay ma 9ar? ya3ny shnu?

Me: ana 7athartk:p bakhaleek tshof mn khashmk mo 3yink

Zaid: obb obb khefay 3alayna grandizer

Me: haay tara asaweha

Zaid: inshoof yala gn

Me: Laaa latnaaam eb frashyy!!!!!

10 minutes passed. No reply.

Naaam le7mar:)

Akheeran w9alt el bait

I opened the door and started running, passing by the ground floor living room i heard a chuckle

I stopped mid way and turned around, i saw zaid standing and laughing at me

Me: ya7mar w qasman bela maytha7k

Zaid: LOL you should've saw your self as you were running!! Khebla

Me: itnarfz walaaah, ekkhtra3t a7asb nemt b frashy

Zaid: la la mara7 anam latkhafen

Me: haha ashwa, laish el bait hady:p wain oboy

Zaid: safar

Me: la jad waina

Zaid: safar walah

Me: w laish maygoly?

Zaid: madre walah, ra7 ohwa weya khalty maryam w me7sn

Me: w ana? mo bnta? mayfaker feny

Zaid: ra7 gha9bn 3ana

Me: shnu elshay ely gha9bn 3ana? eyroo7 wykhaleny ya3ny? la w brou7y bel bait?

Zaid: la2 galy ana anam hny

Me: la walah? eykhaleny brou7y w al7en enta mkhalek tnam hny ya3ny 3ala bona makon bro7y wla shnu ? lay hal daraja oboy nesa ilsana3 w elo9oool  w eykhalyny bro7y wysafer? mo kafy omy w okhoy ra7aw, al7en oboy ga3d eywakherny 3an 7ayata ba3ad


I ran up to my room and cried, i kept on crying realizing that i have no family now. Even though their my new family for 3 years, i still feel left out, i still feel like i have no one.

My door was being unlocked and only one person had the key, it was rosy

She entered and sat on the corner of my bed

I hugged her really hard and cried, mu 3ashan oboy safar, kaifa khal eysafer, bas its about the idea of being left out, being unwanted

Rosy: shushh sweetheart don't cry 

Me: i cant rosy walah i cant

Rosy held my head and forced me to look into her serious looking eyes

: you have to stop crying about everything, baba went with mehsin so he would take a college test, he told me to take care of you, he did not leave you

Me: ambala he left me! just like mama and faisal left me, rosy i have no family right now, all i have is you, i don't want to loose you like im loosing baba

Rosy has been my nanny since the day i was born, so yeah she's basically my second mom.

Rosy: wala if you say this again i will go to india

Me: nooo rosy

Rosy: then dont say you lost baba, he is a tired man, he is working really hard for you, you need to appreciate that, and he is still here for you

Rosy gave me another life lecture then said

: now go downstairs to zaid, he is here from 2

Me: ola why

Rosy: because he said i dont want hessa to feel alone when she comes back home

umbaaay:(

Me: inzain rosy from how long did you know him?

Rosy smiled and said: when he was 8 he used to sleep in our house a lot, i know him since then, he was faisal's bestfriend, even when faisal was in high school

Me: really?

Rosy: yeah really, what you think baba will let anyone sleep in the house?

Me: yeah i thought he would

Rosy: nooo, this boy is like baba's son, he raised him

Me: ohhh.

I ran downstairs to find zaid sitting in the living room he was laying on the coach, staring at the ceiling

Me: e7m

He jumped from the coach and stood in front of me

Zaid: 7e9a ana asf etha noomty ehny emthaygtch, bas lana 3amy galy, bas 3ade, ana akalmch eb whatsapp w goleely shetsawen w kel kha6wa tro7enlaha

Me: olah olah shako? mn gal mthaygny? ana knt m3a9ba mn oboy lana ra7 w ma galy

Zaid: ya3ny ana mo emthaygch?

Me: la2 kelsh la2

Zaid: ufff ekhtra3t, jad a7asb kerahteeny

Me: la law shnu bakrhk bel3aks ana a7

chan asket, shloooooon chethyy:):):)

Zaid: intay?

Me: uhh anaa

Zaid smiled and said: ehh?

Me: ana a7b ilkel, ma akrah a7ad

Zaid: ohh, eh zain tsawen

Chena ma 3jeba kalamy?;s 

Me: eh:p

Zaid: inzaaain shbtsawen elyom?

Me: walah shay, batsaba7 w bag3ad

Zaid: khoush 3ayal, ana ray7 ayeeb shay nakla lana 7ade you3an

Me: uhh eh okay

Zaid: 3endch 17 minutes tetsaba7ain

Me: la2 mo kaifk

Zaid: ambala

Me: uffffff!!

Zaid: latet2afefain:)

Me: uff uff uff

Zaid: intay taben ten6again

Me: looool la 

Zaid: khala9 3ayal, 19 minutes w mako ghairhom

Me: waay okay

Zaid: 3 2 1 go!

I ran to my room and locked the door, 3nad 3alayh bag3ad sa3a:p
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im really tired magdar i type akthar wla bakharb6 bel 7achy:p PLEASE COMMENT!! etha you commented wayed i'll post bacher, and etha akthar mn last time i might post 2:p



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