Tuesday, 19 June 2012

CHAPTER 22


6ala3na 7ag the whole day, at around 7 he dropped me home lana kan byrou7 3end rab3a, el bayt kaan fathy, rosy w jerry w el house keepers kelehoum ra7aw holiday, so i played outside with bella.

I still didn't enter the house, I was in the garden, my phone's battery was drained. Kent hada bella tel3ab 3ala kayf'ha, bs majest Daisy. (daisy is me7sin's huge black husky) lana i was scared of him.


Daisy kanat dakhel her cage

I was sitting on the grass playing with bella wlaa someone grabbed me from my shirt and smashed me to the wall.

I couldn't see anything cause this person was hitting me

Lafayt wlaa kan labs black shirt with a black trousers, he was covering his face, it was a body of a man.

Me: HEDDDDNYYYYY

But he still didn't reply, he pulled my hair really hard that bits of my hair fell from my head, he grabbed me from my neck and hit my head really hard on the wall.


Bella was barking a lot, i was hoping one of the neighbors would hear me, but with no such luck, no one did.

Rakhaa eeda shwaya fa i thought that this was my chance, i kicked him really hard then ran as fast as i could to open my house door













it was locked

i felt like i was going to die today, my nose was bleeding non stop, i felt that i've broke my hand.

My only hope was if i let daisy jump on him, i ran as fast as i could to open daisy's cage, i was so scared, would daisy jump on me instead of the guy, but i had no choice. The man was getting closer and closer, while i was trying to open the cage he carried me

Guy: 3araftay ana mnu? ana elee em6areshlch el pin message

Me: WAKHER 3ANY PLEAAASE!!

Guy: t7asbeen etha bechaytay bet3awreen galby?? hehhheh laaaa 7abeebty

He was trying to find something in my pockets, i didn't know what it was, i was screaming alot.

He stabbed me with a knife on my back.

I poked my fingers in his eyes. He fell on the ground

I rushed back to daisy, I was crawling, i couldn't walk

ya rab yefham el chalb.

Tamayt agra 9ourat el fate7a b galby.


I opened the cage, screamed and pointed at the guy and said: JUMMP ON HIM!

Daisy erkethat w 3athat el rayal b reela, he was running out of our house and getting into his car


Rekab sayarta w mesha.



I didn't know what to do, i was bleeding everywhere, my phone was off, i fell on the ground, my legs couldn't hold me anymore.

30 mns later wela el suwaaq wel khadam radaw

Rosy ran as fast as she could and said: my child my child!!

Shalouny w rakebounyy el sayara b asra3 shay

Rosy was crying a lot, I couldn't breath properly

7asayt eny bamoutt

Rosy screaming at jerry: FASTER SHES NOT BREATHING!!

Jerry wadany el hospital, they took me to the ER immediately

I was connected to million of wires, i wasn't breathing, 7a6aw hatha el machine elee ey7a6ouna 3ala el heart.

*Me7sn's Point of view*

hathy rab3 mara adeg 3ala 7e9o w mobilha mughlaq, w ma7ad eyrd 3ala telephone el bayt.

Gemt w radayt el bayt 3ala 6oul

Laman we9alt el bayt wla legayt sacheena 6ay7a 3ala el arth, w el arth kela daam, w daisy mahdouda

Dagayt 3ala jerry wala kanaw bel mustashfa, kent dayes 180-190


Bas ad3y yarab ma 9ar feha shay, ya rab ele 9ar feha mu sebety lany khalayt'ha brou7ha

Back to 7e9a




I woke up in a white colored room, almost the same one that was from my brother's accident.

I was wearing a hospital dress, I was connected to a lot of wires, i could see me7sin from the glassed window that faced the hallway.


He was talking to an officer.

El sher6y dakhal 3alay.

Policeman: el salam 3alaykoum 7e9a, 7amdellah 3ala salamtch

I was quite i couldn't speak

Me7sn: 7e9a laysh sakta? ta7achay

Policeman: latkhafeen, ana yaay ehny 3ashan asa3dch

Still....no answer

Policeman: ent ukhuha?

Me7sn: eh

Policeman:wayn umha w ubuha?

Me7sn: umy bel shalayh w ubuy emsafer

Policeman: lasm etdg 3ala ubuha al7een, ne7taja eyee el makhfar, lana hathy te3teber jareemat qatel

Me7sn: enshalah, adeg 3alayh elyoum

Policeman: ana 3ndy el sacheena ele kanat eb baytkoum, e7na ra7 en7awl en6al3 ba9mat eyda, w enshalah en3arf menu uhwa, bas ne7tajch ya 79a, lasm tetkalemayn.

Dr: ehya al7een eb 7alat en9daam, yabelaha youm aw youmayn 3ashan tegdar tetkalam, hatha shay 6abee3y

The dr and policeman went

Me7sn: 7e9a mnu ele sawa feech chethy? please gouly ay shay, shnu loun sayarta, shloun shakla, abyath asmar?

I couldn't talk

Me7sn: 7e9a ana martha a7ad eysawy feech chthy w ana asf, kela meny, law mu emkhaleech bru7ch chan al7en ma 9arat hal salfa

Me7sn dame3at 3ayna

En9damt akthar

ashartla ena eyee w yeg3ad yame

I finally talked

Me: me7sn hathy mu mushkeltk, please la tabchy, allah katb ena ey9er hal shay, w el7amdellah ena ana layl7en 3aysha

Me7sn: el7mdellah, okay uhwa ta7acha? gal shay?

Me: uhwaa

Me7sn: uhwa shnu?

Me: uhwa el pin msg guy





8 comments:

  1. WOW!unexpected at all!pleaseee tryy to post anthor chapter todayyy!!w b3dainn ha4a pin msg guy shaybi f 79a hal maskeena!!tksr al5a6r;(

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  2. OMG OMG OMG.!!!!!! 3jeeeb ! Ur an amazing writer and keep it up post another one today please :(

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  3. PLZ POST THE NEXT CHAPTER TODAYY:(!!!! I really love your storyy xx

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  4. Agolch rayee sway ely ya6ree 3laich cuz e7na ga3den ngra mt7msen shnu bseer b3dain .... Ra7 yroo7 el7mas Etha 3rfna shnu bseer ... Faj2ena ;p

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  5. lool a little TOO much action, madri a7s shda3wa he stabs her so unrealistic, when i said more action i meant more heartbreak or a meaner khaled... mu chthee!

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  6. please let it be a dream, wallah 9ar murder case mu 89a...

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  7. A7laa shay elmurder part 5aleeh wallah it makes the story more interesting;p:**

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  8. :'o *speechless* wallah maskeena 7e9a!!! :'( Daisy<3 post sooon! :* -Jx

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