Tuesday, 13 November 2012

CHAPTER 45 (old story)

Okaay so i decided that i want to start writing from both Zaid and Hessa's perspective, so you'd know how both of them feel.

Baba: 7e9a, intay al7een kebartay, 9ertay mara, w khalas intay mo yahel, al7een entay bwayh zawaj, w ely bagolch eya wayed mohem w ra7 eyqarer mostaqblch w abech tfakeren feh 3adel

Me: haw baba shqasdk?

Baba: elyom dag 3alay 3amch Hamad, oboo khaled, ely eykon refeej m7sn 3arafteeh?

Me: eh shfeeh

Baba: daag elyom 3alay ys2al 3anch, yabee yakh6bch 7ag welda, w e7na sa2alna 3an le9bay, wala khoush wa7d

Khoush wa7d ha?:)

Me: enta mn9jk baba?

Baba: eh laish?

Me: laa baba, goleehom ma naby

Baba: 7e9a fakray bel mawtho3 3adel

Me: maby afaker, ta3athar mnhom, w lo sma7t baba latyeeebly 6ary hal mawthoo3 mara thanya

I quickly ended the conversation with my father and tried to forget what he said, wala ag3ad mo mtzawja 6ol 3omry wala atzawaj khaled

i went back to the girls wla farou7a already came, salamt 3alayha w re7na ta7at

they all jumped in the pool while i went and turned up the speakers

my mind was crammed up with lots of thoughts, i wasn't focused on the conversation that was going on

Lulu: 7e9aaa

Lulu: 7e9aaaaaaaaa

i finally realized she was talking to me

Me: haaaa?

Lulu: haw shfeech matsm3eeny? 9arly sena anadeech

Me: asfa wala bas baly mo wyay

Zayoun: ohhh ohhhh etfakreeen bel 7ub

Me: tekfain ay 7ub?;p

Zayoun: hahaa astahbel

Lulu: inzaain yala khal nbadl w netmasha bel sayara, w nakhethlna dinner mn ay moka

Me: okay ilsa3a cham al7een?

Lulu: 7:39

Me: yala 3ayal bsr3a gomaw

Each one of them entered a room and took a shower then got dressed, as usual i was the first one to finish, i didn't want to wear something that didnt felt comfy, so i wore a pink juicy training suit.

I went downstairs to find lulu sitting in the garden

Lulu: haa khala9tay

Me: laaa lail7een ga3da atsaba7

Lulu: wai3 wai3 yal baykhaaaa

Me: hehe madre 3anch!!

Lulu: inzain gomay khal netmasha 7awalaayn baytkom, aby a7ark reely shway w bas2lch shay

Me: yala okay

We started walking then lulu said: 7e9a laish elyoom entay mo 3ala ba3thch? fe shay mthaygch?

Law tadreeen bas, mo shay, elaa ashyaa!!

Me: la walah shay

Lulu: 79aaaay9, ana a3rfch mn kntay hal 6ool, betfahmeeny ena ma fech shay?

Me: waaay lulu takhaylay elyom oboy dag 3alay, eygoly ena khaled yaby yakh6by, 

I was interrupted by a sound that moved

Me: sema3tay?

Lulu: ehh, yommmaa 79oo emshay khandsh akhaf ga6wa!!

I ran inside the house, im TERRIFIED by cats!!! i have some kind of phobia from them!

Me continuing what i was saying: takhaylay 3gb kel ely sawa feeny laa 3ayn eyee wyakh6eb, laa wl moshkela el akbar ena oboy eygoly ana sa2l 3an el9bay w ena ohwa khoush wa7d, ma dara ena hadny 3ala shay ma yeswa, 3ala wa7da qaleelat adab wt7er w kaan yadry ena ana ma asawy hal ashyaa

Lulu: ayshaaay!!!

Me: walah jad!!



ZAIDS PERSPECTIVE

I was coming back cause i forgot my phone, when i saw lulu and hessa standing outside, when i heard something that broke my heart

Enkha6bat? Shlon? W meta? Laish ga3adt saket 6ool hal moda, laish sekat 7ag 4 sneen. 
4 sneen wana bas ashoofha mn b3eed w agra her tweets 3ashan a3arf wain ray7a, w laman 3araft'ha geltlaha belthab6 shlon a7s bas geltlaha ina 3an wa7da thanya esmha sara, ana 7maar iny chathabt, el bent khalas ra7at men eeedy

Dakhalt el bait, wla ashoof 7e9a wagfa b3eed, shafatny bas ma ebtesamt, bas a3tqd lasm awakher shwy 3anha, 3ashan ma a3awr galby akthaar, elbent al7een atwaqa3 enkha6bat, w lasm a7trm nafsy w a7trmha ehya ba3ad

Akhatht mobily w re7t el duwaniya

Ga3adt bel zawya broo7y w afaker

Faj2a wla eydsh wa7d awal mara ashoofa, shakla refeej 7mayn(refejy)

(btw ely dash ohwa khaled)

Khaled: barkoooly shabab!!!

Them: mabrrokkk bas 3ala shnu?

Khaled: akheeeeran khe6abt!!!

Kelman gaam w gala mabrook w madre shnu 

7mayen: mabrook khaled! allah eywafgk enshalah! 3ad mageltlna men khe6abt?

Khaled: 7abeeb allah eybark feek, ameen enshalah, Hessa Al X

Galby 6a7 eb ba6ny awal ma sema3t esmha

Ma3qoola 7e9a? Ya3ny already wafa8tay? w mata3abtay roo7ch ena tgolenly?

6ala3t men el duwaniya eb asra3 wakt

Rekabt sayarty w dest 7ayl, faj2a wla a7s shay 3ala wayhy, nazalt el manthara wla ashof dmoo3 matrosa eb wayhy

La7th la7tha? ana? Ana ely mayhmny shay, ana el qawy ely mayhzny a7ad abchy?

Akhhh law bas 7e9a tadry....

shaghalt my majeeds playlist and i just cruised around, ma wa3ayt ela elsa3a 9arat 1 

chayakt mobily wla whatsapp mn 7e9a

: Zaid waink? 3endy khoush khabar!! -10:45
 Zaid? -11:33
-zaid laykoon 9ar feek shay?- 11:52
-ZAAID-12:17
-uff please zaid red gool ayshay-12:44

Garayta w 7egart'ha

Dakhalt el bait wla 7e9a ga3da 3ala el sofa tan6rny

7e9a: waay zaid laish matrd 3ala mobilk! kheft wala

Me: madre

7e9a: umm ok, bagolk shay 7ada eywans!! barekly!!

Me: mo lasm tgolenly, already adre, mabrook

7e9a: okhh already galek?

Me: eh galy, a9lan el akhbar hal ayam bsr3a yntashron

7e9a: ohh

3a6ayt'ha thahry w re7t dary

HESSA'S PERSPECTIVE

Haw shloon yadry zaid ena i took an A eb akher quiz?hmmm akeed Dr Ahmed gala! bas laish shakla mnafs w mala khelgy? ymkn ta3baan aw shay

I went upstairs to my room and slept 

I woke up the next day at about 9 

I washed, dressed and went downstairs

Me: rosy where is zaid?

Rosy: He go, he took his stuff with him

Me: what? why?

Rosy: baba will come now, jerry went to the airport

Me: 9ejj??!!

Rosy: yes!!

Me: HEYAA, yalah tara im hungry send Jaimy to mcdonalds and order for me pancakes please

Rosy: okay i'll tell him now

Me: thankyou!

I ran upstairs to get my phone

I checked whatsapp wla zaid was online, i sent him : laish re7t?

He read it then exited the app, haw shfeeh hatha? bada3 kela ya7gerny

Haman ra7 elyom w ma gal bye wala shay, ma ta3ab ro7a ams eygoly shay wana na6reta

Amoot wa3arf shsawayt ghala6 3ashan kel hatha ey9eer

My breakfast arrived, as i was eating it i saw a shadow behind me, i turned around to find me7sn standing

Me: 7ASOOOOOOOON

I ran and jumped and hugged him, latloomony walaht 3ala okhoy

Me: ya7maaar tsafron w matgolonly haaa

Me7sn: ba3ad shnsawy, kelshay 9ar bsr3a walah

Me: khalas 3ade, haa qbalook el jam3a?

Me7sn: lail7en madre, eyrdonlna khabar ba3ad shahar

Me: olaaa

Me7sn: ehhh, inzain shsawaytay we7na msafreen

Me: gazaayt gaaaz w sheft wayed awlaad 7lween

Me7sn hit me by my arm playfully

Me7sn: aaaya7maaaaraaa! hatha wana hny tgolen chethy shloon law ana mo hny! banaat hal wakt mako 7aya kelsh

Me: LOOOL me7sn like chillax

Kent ga3da astahbel, i dont speak that way:p

Me7sn: like chilax haa? taabeen afl3ch box 3ala wayhch ey3almch shnu chillax

Me: omg your like soooooooo uncool

Me7sn: waaaai3 7e9o 6ala3tay men rab3 el mcchicken

Me: LOL shfeek astahbl wyak

Me7sn: haha, inzaain tara rab3y byon baytna elyom

Me: okaay?

Me7sn: la mo okay, mabee ashoofch bel bait

Me: haaay 6a3 hatha, laish ba3ad?

Me7sn: 3ashan mayshoofonch ba3ad laish

Me: yala 3ad yala, maly shghl fekom

Me7sn: ywaylch en garabtay 9oob il duwaniya

Me: way me7sn laykon ana mayta 3ala rab3k ya3ny

Me7sn: la bas ga3d agolch

Me: okay okay

Me: wain omy w oboy?

Me7sn: ra7aw 3end mama hessa

Me: ahaa

Me7sn: yala ana ray7 anam shway, taben shay?

Me: salamtk

Me7sn turned around, as he was walking i went and hugged him from his back

Me7sn: haa faj2aa

Me: a7bkk me7sn, walah a7bk, haman ga3da a7bk kether alah yr7ma faisal

Me7sn smiled at me: 7abeeebty 7a9ooon, wala matadren shhkether anaa a7bch, alah laya7rmny mnch

I let go of him then he said: wala men luluu=))

Me: kaaaaaaalb:p

Me7sn: la la astahbel, a9lan enty tswaain lulu w 6waayf lulu ba3ad

Me: 3ayaaar

Me7sn: jaad:p

Me: yeah right, yallah bye lasm arou7 el jam3a

Me7sn: ma3a elsalaamaa

I left the house and went to the university 

I decided to sit around after i was done with all of my classes, hoping Zaid might pass by....but with no such luck, he didn't show up.

I got tired so i went back home, i spent the rest of the day sitting with my family, yara and yasmeena came over with their husbands, the day ended and i still didn't get a reply from Zaid.





5 comments:

  1. Mafy second post ?;( pleassseee nby post thany 3ashanch 6awalty waayedd ;( btw your an AZMAZING writer <3!!!!

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  2. Omg please 5al zaid e3arif ina she didn't say yes!!!!! AMAZING POST!!!

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  3. OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!! I almost cried wallaa!!:'( pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaasseee pleeeeeeeeaasee plleeeeeeaaasee pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaassseee post a second chapter today!! Cause i love your story soo much and i'm sooo excited please!!

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  4. PLEASE POST ASAP! I realllllyy lovee youur blogg!!! I hopee you post today or tmw

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  5. Eyb6 elchabd Khalid!!!!!!! wai3

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